And further comments from Mr. Ardai
Nice! The pointing gun makes a big difference, I think (for the better). I might have opened the woman's eyes, and possibly would have put her in a slightly more modern outfit -- that one looks very 1920s rather than, say, 1940s-1950s. The man's head and hair are of course much too neat for someone who's just been shot in the head -- I wouldn't propose turning it into a mess of gore, but I might at least disarrange his hair a little. On the whole, though, I like it...
Nice! The pointing gun makes a big difference, I think (for the better). I might have opened the woman's eyes, and possibly would have put her in a slightly more modern outfit -- that one looks very 1920s rather than, say, 1940s-1950s. The man's head and hair are of course much too neat for someone who's just been shot in the head -- I wouldn't propose turning it into a mess of gore, but I might at least disarrange his hair a little. On the whole, though, I like it...
--Charles
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